Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts

Monday, March 14, 2011

Artists In My Life: Erika L.

I have known Erika for about 3 years now and she never ceases to amaze me with her way with words.  She has made me realize that I have A LOT to learn about the English language and how much easier it could be to express my thoughts and feelings if i knew the right words to say.
Erika also has a quirky side. She is a bit of an unconventional person. I love this about her because she always keeps me on my toes and when spending time with her, there is never a dull moment.
So thank you Erika, for reminding me that the pen is indeed, mightier than the sword, what the definition of despondent is and that it's OK to like Barbarella but hate Rocky Horror Picture Show. ;)

1. How would you describe your style of writing.
Intentional, sometimes surprising.

2. Are there any people, famous or not, that have influenced your work?
Kim Addonizio and Marie Howe taught me that poetry could be personal, introspective, and powerful without having to fall into Sylvia Plath's Confessionalist footsteps. In the midst of my horrible high school poetry writing I was believed in enough by two different English teachers. In early college, I was given Cliver Barker, the beautiful bastard that broke my world. His book Sacrament is one of the most powerful, wonderful works of fiction I have ever read. He taught me to bring the sacrosanct into my work; he taught me not to rely on common, holy symbolism but to create my own. He gave me the courage to explore in my writing places I was a little too afraid to go. This has cropped up most recently in my current poem, “Dreams About the Moon”.

3. When did you first discover your creative talents?
Oh, early. It happened to be a criticism of someone's work. We were practicing cursive in whatever grade grammar school kids learn cursive. Mine has always been abysmal and the process was all the more torturous by the terrible Christmas poems we were copying. White, faintly lined paper pasted on atrocious red construction paper highlighted by my even more abysmal cutting of said paper and the lopsided little holly berries in the corners.

I thought, “I can do better than this” – in regard to the poem. I still can't cut in a straight line and my cursive still leaves something to be desired.

4. Describe yourself in five words
Persnickety, Introspective, Devoted, Perceptive, Aesthete.

5. Do you have any phobias?
Yes. Even talking about house centipedes makes me want to cry and I hate clowns – not because of anything Steven King ever dreamed up. It's the deception. It's the false happiness, forced social nature, and the obvious desire to escape oneself. It's disturbing. That, and I watched Killer Klowns from Outer Space as a child and *still* cannot get the sucking sound out of my head. I recently started to lucidly dream to escape the nightmare I was having wherein the Klowns were coming. It involved me deciding to escape on a riding lawn mower. So, secretly I believe all clowns are liars that really want to turn us into cotton candy cocoon food.

And now for some of Erika's poetry: 
Dreams About the Moon

1. Today the clouds unstuck themselves
from the sky. A great unraveling.
Like clots of wool they fell
some fibers loose, drifting upward
to frame the low slung moon.

We gathered in the meadows.
We gathered in the cities
our palms brimming with the stuff,
fine scratches trailing
the delicate skin of our forearms.

Set to work carding the thick
tufts, our fingers burned
with the precision of lovers'
first touch. Thread colors
changing like fingerprints.

I opened up. A clean line cut
from groin to sternum, the star
of my chest unfurling, pulling inward
the cloud fiber, and spinning
it back out again. This time, alone.

Left to the shimmering work,
left to the task of weaving cloud,
flesh, and bone into summer
grass. Above, Athena
watched with cool, gray eyes.

2. When I was young,
we used graph paper
to draw our future
houses on the moon
(to keep them from being
lopsided). We planned
the windows, the doors.
Our tiny, space gardens.

Travel was primitive.
Each home sat
in its own fortress
between glass walkways
like interconnected
snow globes,
a lunar suburbia.

Here we wouldn't wonder
about phases – they would be true
as seasons. We would not concern
ourselves with tides,
but of the inevitable spinning
from our orbit, an orphaned rock,
made less special
away from the marble blue
center of our history.

Monday, February 21, 2011

The Artists In My Life

Throughout my life, i have always been surrounded by creative, talented people. As a new segment to my blog I would like to showcase the talents of those close to me. There are so many wonderfully gifted people I was having trouble deciding on who to start with, then it came to me (and was such an obvious answer) My own mother, Gail Daitz. 

As far back as I remember, my mother has always written witty, funny and heartfelt poems and I would love to share a few with my readers. But first, lets get to know Mom a little: 


SSSW: When did you first discover your creative talents?
GD: I think I was in Kindergarten, it was just before Father's Day
we were making cards for our Dad. Enclosed is the card, that my Dad so loving sent to me. Inside it said "Roses are red, violets are blue, you love me and I love you".


SSSW:  How would you describe your style?
GD: Whimsical and reflective

SSSW: What influences your work? 
GD: I can be anywhere, and become immediately inspired, the grocery store, my kitchen, I remember
a time when I was on the job Nursing, administering medications, and it hit me, I grabbed a paper towel and began to write in between patients. It's pretty spontaneous.

SSSW: Describe yourself in 5 words.
GD: Silly, strong-willed, caring, organized, Spiritual

Now for a little taste of Moms poetry:


T'was the day after Christmas,
and all was askew,
The tree was all dried out,
didn't water it, did you?

The wrappings were scattered,
I stepped on a tack,
as I picked up the mess,
I pulled out my back!

The boxes and bows were found everywhere,
and a sticky candy cane was glued
to a chair.

Cookies half eaten, and the cheese was like rubber,
I reached for the vacuum and a found a new scrubber.

And as I was cleaning, I paused for a minute,
and saw that the fishbowl had a rubber ball in it!

I wasn't upset, I didn't go mad,
and I thought for a moment,
bout the good time we had.

The family together, made everything right,
we all got along, their wasn't a fight.

As I am cleaning,
I shed a few tears,
for the loved ones we've missed,
over the years.

Now that it's over, and my thoughts are all clear,
I wish all a blessed holiday,
and a HAPPY NEW YEAR!



And another...

Entitled: Dave
     Where has all the music gone?
We sat for hours and listened to the songs you used to play
not thinking that one day, it would sadly go away
We sat for hours and listened to the stories you would tell,
and now there is quiet, but we remember them so well
We sat for hours at firesides, you kept adding so much wood
and now the fire pit's as empty as the places where you stood
We sat for hours and reminisced about years of long ago
and the tears and laughter that we shared, had only helped us grow.....
It's been a year since you left us, and remember you we will,
theirs an empty spot inside of us, that only you can fill.
But our memories will sustain us, and help to get us through,
and when we hear "Brown Eyed Girl" we will always think of you!


 
Thanks Mom.